Oh my gosh this is really good - its hilarious!

I really love this! Amazing!
Please write more!
Izzy

this is a really good story can't what for the next chapter

This isn't bad, but I think you need to put in some description. I was confused by the characters and there actions and why they were acting like they were. The way they welcomed the Connie and co. didn't sound like any welcome I've ever heard at school and I've been new at least twice. No cruelty intended and if you put in the description I'm pretty certain this would be much better :)

An interesting story. You writing is very good and quite intriguing. There were a couple of mistakes grammar- wise but those can easily be corrected. I love the story plot, its very hard to create new characters and a new atmosphere but you do it very well. Looking forward to reading more. Update soon.

K8yx