Wow. In the best possible way.

I can relate to Remy's frustrations: When people who have forfeited their right to express opinions on your health suddenly hone in on the one thing that helps you cope with what 'you' have lost by their willing forfeit. At least cigarettes cannot be hypocritical.

I'm not sure that will make sense to anyone. Ah well... Points to me for trying to articulate my thoughts. XD

Also, I was smoking while I read this, so I REALLY enjoyed it.

Bwahahahahahaha! You had me chuckling all the way throug this, even though in essence it was really kinda sad. And touching that everyone should care that he smokes. I mean... I dunno, it seems kind of hypocrital if you ask me. Rogue wasn't the only one who left him out there. A lot of the other X-Men did as well. Which was why the whole Antartica thing was screwed, but anyway... I digress.
I'm surprised you managed to rhyme so much of this. That's pretty damn good. And I could just imagine the Cajun saying it as well. The last line though... The last line was hilarious. Classic. I just exploded. Thanks for putting a smile onto my face. Yes, I've had a pretty crap day, but it's kinda bearable now... :D

I love it. The pure spite in his words is wonderful. Although I usually despise poems that rhyme, this one, I must say, is fit for the books.

This was amazing. I loved it. I'm not into rhyming poetry, but this didn't interfere with the fluid notion of the sentences and the flow of the words. I imagine he really does feel like that, and the way you've written it is really realistic. Great job. I can't congratulate this enough.
"I know you want me dead
But I get to choose how"
Great stanza, along with the knife bit. Great job.

I just have to tell you that I really love this poem. I think it's great and you did one hell of a job. Kudos!

J

I liked this. The rhythm was nice and easy. I thought it was a good "from Remy's view" poem. For some reason reminded me a little of eminem... Anyways, a little confused about Bobby. Why does Remy care?

...*hart breaks in to two*...*chokes on words and dies*...

Yea! That is so good. I love everything you write.

cool poem!

YEAH! Smoking kills! Very Gambit, him planning to smoke himself to death while saying don't do it its bad. I like it. Sara V.

Funny. Remy gets tired of all the critics telling him how to live his life, well, don't we all? I like it.

Awsomness!

Personally, I prefer cigars. Yer ol' pal, The Bud.

Ooooooh man! Dark, funny, and *very* Remy. That was just incredible.

Ok, well. I'm confused. I think I'm supposed to be sad, but then I giggle. I like it and I understand it, but I don't know to be sad about it or laugh. Well goodly creative none the less. good show