Reviews for King of Hueco Mundo
Guest 10/4/12 . chapter 3
Hitsugaya is ooc
Guest 8/30/12 . chapter 7
Kenpachixyoruichi
Eyed The Unknown 6/6/12 . chapter 1
Very Lemonly. But I like it. Thks
El Frijolero 4/6/12 . chapter 7
Wow bro nice story although I wish I could've found it sooner oh and you write amazing lemons
AppleAltair 4/1/12 . chapter 7
Can you do a one shot of Hitsugaya and Matsumoto or Harribel and which ever one you choose or both if you decide to do this be Hitsugaya's cumdump/slave.
hayato09 2/26/12 . chapter 7
nice story, keep it up i hope to see more
Prince of Winter Dragons 2/6/12 . chapter 7
Hi, So sorry that took forever and a day for me to review. I like how Rangiku and Tier to turns having there way with Hitsugaya. Before the fics over Rangiku must try anal. I think It would be fitting, It sucks the you ending you fic, But I love the way It's going. As for other M rated one-shots I like to see, While Hitsugaya would have to be the lead male. As for ladies take you pick, Mostly all of Bleach females are hot and cool. I would to love Rangiku, Rukia, Sui -Feng and Yoruichi. Rather it be similar or different. I would love to see It, I hope the next chapter Is just or if not longer than this one. I hope you update soon PEACE AND LOVE.
Prince of Winter Dragons 1/27/12 . chapter 6
Hi,So sorry It too me forever and a day to chapter was great a little too short,But nice none the Uniforms are very sexy,The ladies that Is.I like how Rangiku was able to keep up with Tier.I can't wait for both of them to have there way with Hitsugaya.I'm really said to hear the story well be finishing soon,But I can't wait to see the final last chapter has to be the longest,This has been a really nice soon If you have time PEACE AND LOVE.
Prince of Winter Dragons 1/17/12 . chapter 5
Hi,This was a great chapter,Again I like how your not scared to write hard lemon them doing anal from the start,I also noticed that the ladies like for Toushirou to go down on them a lot,That hot I hope to see more of that they marked each other has there,It was very hot.I like detail you adding keep It up.I vote for them to both mark Rangiku,Look foreword to her and Tier soon If you can PEACE AND LOVE.
Prince of Winter Dragons 1/9/12 . chapter 4
Hi,You did It again,Another great chapter.I really like how your not sacred to write hard lemons,Like them trying makes the story more better and interesting,A bit realistic really wore Rangiku,I hope she joins the fun again.I like the way you write Tier and Toushirou,I love how take she Is with Hitsugaya,Same with him and I really look to see how Rangiku fits in to there bond,I think all three of them should grow closer.I 'm really staring to look foreword to this story It's really good,But I wish the chapters were 's like right when It's starts getting good It's over,Update soon If you have time PEACE AND LOVE.
redlox2 1/5/12 . chapter 3
God dammit i need more!
Prince of Winter Dragons 1/4/12 . chapter 3
Hi,Sorry It took me awhile to review,But this chapter was great,The last review was me I forgot to sign In,I still find the fact that Toushirou wearing jeans In Hueco Mundo still Is his reason for leaving the Soul Society a bit foolish,To me you could have made It way lamer,Not saying It glad that Rangiku Is joining them,I really look foreword to see how she fits you should put a little more detail with the clothes and undergarments,Also what position they take during there "Fun Time" If you know I job making them Hitsugaya and Matsumoto share control,But I would like It more If the ladies took more bit not a you can do a story like this for Rangiku and Toushirou,There's not a enough lemons stories for that pairing.I look foreword to more hardcore lemons between Tier x Toushirou,Toushirou x Rangiku and Rangiku x Tier,I hope you had Happy Holidays PEACE AND LOVE.
Guest 12/30/11 . chapter 2
Hi,Again you did a great job,Loved this for the fact that add Rangiku to the mixes,HitsuMatsu Is my favorite Bleach pairing.I know I'm wired,So by have Rangiku join the fun just add ten more points to this great I don't know If CRACK was the right word to describe what I meant,But certain things bug Toushirou turns his back on his family,friends and duties with no hesitation or forethought.I personally think If was to stay a captain of the Gotei 13 and King of Hueco Mundo,Would be badass on so meany why would he have on jeans instead of his shingami uniform?,Little stuff like that bothers me for some reason.I'm sure your intention was not to make this a deep story,But I do think that you should add a little more depth,detail and make the chapter longer.I really hope that Rangiku plays part In these story,I think It me cool If this be came Toushirou/Tier/Rangiku be hot,By the way I don't know If you Tier Harribel Is alive,I really hope this story goes not nearly enough HitsuHarri or HitsuMatsu lemon fics.I hope to to see more intense lemons In the chapters ahead,Update soon If you have time PEACE AND LOVE.
dragonick711 12/29/11 . chapter 2
finally a story with HitsugayaxHallibel in it and lemons just made it better the lack of stories that have this pairing confuses me considering all the pairings that have the espada paired up with the soul reaper they fought
Riotstarter1214 12/29/11 . chapter 1
Best lemons ever and can't wait for more they're kids will have the biggest tits ever hahaha. And hook nel up with kenpachi. That's a pairing I'm curious about.
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