I'm really, really confused but it was good

Very good.

This is so amazingly well-written! I am really amazed. It is probably one of the most well-written texts I have ever read. You're doing a great job!

I don't even know where to begin to describe how impressed I am with this story. It is beautiful, dark, and exotic. I personally thought it was terribly sad, but so nicely written I couldn't stop reading. Very well done.