Love this story, even the SECOND time through!

Funny how they each have a different perception of their situation.

Bella and Edward are so frustrating. let's hope they figure this out at some point

ooh Edward you're such a dumb ass

I hate Edward a lot less reading his pov, however I still want to punch him for not telling Bella what he's thinking

Enjoyed reading this it brought me back to high school. My husband and I had a similar situation in high school where we both had a friend telling us different things and she ended up dating my husband for 2 years. We didn't reliaze until after high school how she manipulated the situation. It's funny to think how gullible you are in high school. Anyways thanks for writing I am enjoying it!

I hope you have done EPOV for the second book it balances out the story to see both side... they are both hurting over a misunderstanding.. she should have confronted him... that's all I am sayin'

Wow, looking at things from Epov is very enlightening... things are not as they appear on EITHER side of the spectrum. Man, how can two people be more idiotic than these two have been. If one of the other them had just communicated what they were feeling they would have been together a Long time ago. But each thought the same of the other... both thinking the other was not good enough/too good for the other and they messed themselves up BIG TIME. If they just talked to each other instead of being so self-contained... always thinking they Know what the other wants or did not want, but Never asking questions, just assuming they knew the answer for the other, making decisions for the other based on "facts" they thought they "saw" instead of getting down to the truth! My heart hurts for both of them... great writing Mama

OH GOD! This is really sad! Edward didn't cheat and loves Bella so much. This is what happens when people don't communicate!

I'm still glad Bella left. These two aren't good for each other.

Edward doesn't care about anything but himself. He thinks he cares about Bella but the way he thinks about her is awful. He thinks she's moody and fickle, it doesn't enter his head that he's done something to make her feel that way. Edward treats people like crap and then he's offended when Bella expects him to treat her the same way. He is terrible for her self-esteem.

They obviously can't communicate with each other. There are so many things that don't match up. Not just the interpretation of things the other has said, at times they didn't even hear parts of their dialogue.

well drama.

my god, they are BOTH fools! it does make me wonder how he didnt ever see her staring at him, cause she did, ALL the time!

Poor Edward! :(

I'll start book 2 later today since its 1:33 am & my alarm goes off in 5 hrs. Thanks for sharing the story.

I had an amusing thought after reading the first chapter that if I had read this story first. I would have thought Bella was a major bitch. Oh teenage angst! How ever my guy that keep me a secret was an ass and not like Edward having him & Bella be misunderstanding and unable to communicate because they are teenagers.

Hmm, I'm kinda sad for him...but his lack of communication, with pretty much everyone, put him in his position. Jumping over to book two now.

Lula