Oh this is genius! I'd love to see it continued with Domon finding out that Rain can't get the suit off! That'd be sweet to read! :)

xD Awww it was too short, you could of made it longer.

Honestly I had a similiar idea, but it was from Domon's perspective...xD I hope you'll reconsider and make it a bit longer. Cause it's a great start, but more could be added to it.