Haha! Your English is adorable )

This was awesome! I had fun reading! Thanks for writing it .

Cute. If you're worried about your English, find a Beta Reader to check it.

I was so...awed when I read this...it's so cute...I LOVE THIS STORY!

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Hello Sakura-san! Toki's here to review your fic XD

wait! I know this story! it's from a rinlen strip comic right?

good story for me I don't believe that you're an Indonesian you must be american right? *plak!

keep writing rinlen fanfic for me, okay? onegai

see ya in another story! Toki

I like it a lot!

I thought the story was wonderful. I could sometimes tell when grammar was off, but you explained that English wasn't your first language. But, even though English isn't your strongest point, I thought that the grammar was much better than even native speakers! Keep writing! I will be waiting for the next chapter.

Hm... something about this story seems... familiar... OH RIGHT! It's from that comic strip of Rin and Len. I'm glad you put that in there. That was a nice oneshot!

awwww that was soooo cute!

Aww, So cute. From my guess I think you got this from a manga strip right? but you made a great ending for it and don't worry English is not my first language too but I didn't notice any errors at all, you did a great job!