I love this story and do not wish to be mean when I say this but...I always envisioned Michael as a man who could have any girl he wanted no matter what the circumstance was. But if this is the way that you have envisioned him then I'm sorry.I hope you take this as merely a statement and not really(even though it may seem)as a critisism. I really do love this and hope you will write more.

I think you have written a very good story. It's something else then all the other story's. I enjoyed it very much, end you should continue this story. I also liked your other story's

Sorry for my grammatic faults but I am from Holland. that's why i have such a strange email adress.

Many greets mindy

Hi,

I read this on at the LFN Archive, and it has left me wondering if you are going to write any more in this AU, as it starts really well but leave you hanging..

I would like to read the seqal or next chapter if you ever post it...

Roberta

hehe, cool. Some of sentances are a little mixed up and stumbly, you might want to have someone proof read it for you. But, I am definately in love with the story so far. Can't wait to see what happens on their date!

This is good! Keep on going!

great story i'm really looking forwerd to the next chapter, it's and interesting idea for a story, new and refreshing.. god job! keep it going...

great story i'm really looking forwerd to the next chapter, it's and interesting idea for a story, new and refreshing.. good job! keep it going...

This sounds promising :)

this is great!...please continue!I WANT MORE!