Out of all the cullens , i would have thought Edward would get to Bella best but it seems Emmett has cracked her well built up shield a bit to allow him to help her is alot to her ... she's still not allowing Edward to help but its better than not letting him be for her at all !

i really want to hit her with something now .. she was devastated that no matter how much she begged or cried no one helped her and now everyone is trying to and she wont let them .. i get where she's coming from , the fear and distrust but at this point what could she lose !

Four years .. and she's 21 now .. can i please kill those vile creatures ... Why couldnt she run to her parents .. surely her father could hunt those bastards down !

Tanya is not a nice person indeed .. It seems that edward has a thing for damsels in distress .. but he's the right guy for Bella this time !

i'm respecting james more and more .. He owns a strip club but he actually cares about the girls working for him .. Why couldnt she have met those people before instead of those monsters !

She had a normal life before whoever those fuckers who kidnapped her did what they did to her .. They must have emotionally scarred her for life if she doesnt understand that some people are still compassionate , not all people are monsters like the ones she unfortunately came across !

i cant imagine how a doctor would do something like that and how her father a chief of police couldnt find her til now .. She beyond emotionally damaged and with good reason .. Although she views her self as a whore which is so not true , i get why she's a stripper , not only is she in control but in her mind it's the only job where she feels like she's been told for god knows how long .. I really wanted to hit jasper and maybe Alice right now .. who are they to judge her ..

Amazing Story! I'm completely in love with it. Thanks for writing this story. This story is a lot related to my life. I wasn't trafficked but i was abused by the men that my family trusted. I went through the nightmares and depression. I'm still having trouble dealing with things. But this story gives me hope that I may have a happy life in the future. Thanks again.

I started reading last night - I love this story, here. You have a wonderful narrative voice. A good complex plot that's kept me interested.

I think it can stand on it's own, you know - without the Twilight blend.

Still reading :)

Great story!

Amazing! You put a fairy tail in a dark story but they'll have their well earned HEA!

Liked it :)

wow ... brilliant ... not only the content but ur way with words and ur ability to portray your characters so realistically ... thank u so much for sharing this work ... i felt the highs and the devestating lows wondering myself how bella managed to survive and then with her love and support of and from edward managed to make a life for herself/them ... the depths to how low some individuals can sink always stuns me and i only wish that they didnt exist but they do and i wish that there were/are more happy endings to often horrific situations
keep writing ... cant wait for ur new fic
xoxo

Great story. I read the whole thing over the past few days. It was so dark and full of angst but still hopeful. Great job with such dark subject matter.

truly loved this story - will be adding it to my community and rec'ing it to my friends!