Okay, I like this, I think its great, and you've got a good writing style. I have one question: Why is this listed as a partial parody? Its not very parody-ish, its all dark and dramatic-y (which I also see); like Edward, but cooler :P

are you planning on writing more of this story?because its a good start to a bad ass story

This is good, I really like this rare pairing. I love how in character Victoria is. I hope you update soon,

I don't want to be labeled as a pervert, but this was really hot! It was well written too, I liked the style.

It doesn't need anything else, if you leave it like this, that is fine.

Very well done.

you must update!

Adding and liking this! Btw I'm the first review an I'm gonna follow you through out this story! I'm inlove with how your first chapter went 3 keep up the amazing work hun

Xoxo your #1 fan

I am very interested in this story! Please please keep writing. I'm first review! Woo lol xD I'm number one fan!

Adding this story to alert and favorite as we speak 3

Sitting on the egde my seat till the next chappy! Hurry please

Xoxo Your #1 fan Emmaly :)