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| Reviews for Public Enemy Number One |
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  Az 10/29/12 . chapter 7 Enjoyed a lot. Keep on writing. |
 Rattyrat 8/14/12 . chapter 15LOVE IT WRITE ONE FOR WHEN IN THE FUTURE |
| guest 7/8/12 . chapter 15 OMG this is so good !Do you have a book? You should! This is GREAT! |
| guest 7/8/12 . chapter 14 awesome poor Callum |
| guest 7/8/12 . chapter 10 where did you learn to write so good! You should write a book! |
| guest 7/8/12 . chapter 2 cool! |
| Diamondsgirl101 6/21/12 . chapter 15 Aw! *clasps hands and sniffles back tears* Thank you so much for the mention, buddy! The pleasure was all mine-this is an AMAZING story that most certainly DOES do the CHERUB forum justice! :D And this was a great ending to it! I especially appreciated the "Eight Months Later" thing (I always love a good epilogue in a story), and I cracked up at the image of Callum and Connor wrestling over the phone and Lacey laughing, able to hear everything. AWW IT'S OVER! SO SAD! God, everything's coming to a close these days, ain't it? Well, good luck with your future endeavors buddy! I can't wait to read 'em! ;) |
| Diamondsgirl101 6/21/12 . chapter 13 YAY! I WAS RIGHT! I PREDICTED WHO THE RAT IS! Yay for me! :D Anyway, this was so intense with the game! Hopefully someone figures out the situation Lacey's in though! Must keep reading to find out! AMAZING CHAPTER! :D |
| Diamondsgirl101 6/21/12 . chapter 12 Amazing as always. Where do I start? *palms held upwards imploringly* Well, for one thing, I loved the dialogue in this chapter, particularly among the people at the party ;) It was very teenager-y and realistic. And who's the rat? I must know! I should probably keep reading then! :P |
| cleanupguywithagun 6/19/12 . chapter 15 Well, this was an EPIC story, I really liked it (maybe a bit too much :D). And I hope you'll write a sequel with the Cherubs reuniting again... :) |
| LilMissCandy 6/19/12 . chapter 15 Omg epic ending! When I was reading chapter 14 and the 'he's public enemy number one' part came I was like Omg... It's the title! Hah.. well, fantastic Story and well done. :) |
| wolfergirl 6/18/12 . chapter 13 Hehe I had my suspicions...but poor Lacey :( |
| cleanupguywithagun 6/16/12 . chapter 12 Nice, I liked it. Update soon! :) |
| Aleisha Rose 6/9/12 . chapter 11 Heyy, im really liking the story :) please update soon! much love, Aleisha rose, 3 |
| Diamondsgirl101 5/21/12 . chapter 11 I read, I'm reviewing, and OMG do I love! SO INTENSE! I loved the whole battle (VERY well-written btw) and maybe I'm just a sadist, but I loved that you made Callum get shot ;) More drama! God, I love it :D Keep up the amazingness! :) |
