hurry up and finish so goodddd

i like.

Sure sounds quite intriguing. I'd like to see more up real soon!

This story is very good. Kinda want more about Amber and Julian now but nevermind - keep writing please!

who! cool!

it's just itching at me, i wanna know if he makes her play a new game *grins*

Intriging (that is not how you spell it.). I want to know what Julian is up to. He up to something I can smell it. well not litrally.

Thank you!

Tamashii

i love it. So far, the story is great, keep it up. Just remember, dont wait too long to submit the next chapter, it looses the stories flow

This is cool! Please write another chapter soon!

You did very well

Cool fic! I can't believe it's only gotten 4 reviews! I hope you update soon!

omg this is so cool! i love The Forbidden Game series by L.J. Smith and ur new start sounds great so far! please write more!

Is it Julian? is it Julian reincarnated? Is it perhaps Julians own son? so many possibilities!

oOoOoOooo! i like this soo much! hurry up and write more!

lol it's really good..but you hvae a lot of dialogue and not too manyn actions to go with it. I eman..I get the impression that while they're talking they're standing stock-still and just ...talking. I knwo when *I* talk, I'm usualy gdoing soemthing..I dunno...not ragging on you, juts making a helpful observation.:)