Great story. I love the brash side of Sabrina, although it obviously gets her into trouble too much. Like the little fight between Kelly and Kris, and then the scene when Sabrina doesn't want Kris and Kelly worrying about her even though she's hurt. You demonstrated her character very well.

loved it!

Do you have something against Tiffany? Sabrina was such a boring character, yet you keep replacing Tiffany with her.

With Sabrina in there, the whole Bill Cord thing really gets nipped in the bud, and Kris and Kelly's pain is tranferred to Sabrina. To the end, their dedication is admirable. I like your alternate universes.

Very good story. I never thought of Bri being in that ep.

(Possible Spoilers) I'd been saving this to read until I'd rewatched the episode. It was very interesting . . . I really liked Sabrina's protectiveness of Kelly - and the lengths to which it went. The cooking joke, and Kelly's rescue of her were also great. I'm wondering though, even though Bill was a louse, I never got the impression he was really BAD (i.e. involved with Glenn), more misguided. It was interesting to see you increase his culpability in this A/U? From a technical standpoint, I would suggest 'writing out' numbers (e.g. 20, 100%, 2am etc.), but that's a mere triviality and in no way detracts from the story. Thanks for sharing :-).

An interesting take on the episode.

Nice job! Very believable-keep writing.

I loved it. Keep writing.

Great Bridget! Keep me informed on new stories.

Bridget - cool twist on that storyline. Keep it up!

Hi A great story. I found this site just today. Great work. I happy to see I not alone that still enjoys The Angels.