so when are you going to put the next chapter?

CONGRATUATIONS!
(hands you an oversized trophy.)

You are the first person to write a fanfic containing shady daze x scootaloo!

(hands you an oversized check)

You win!

u need RD in a chapter

_ I still give a crap about this story! Also, this chapter was very dramatic... I liked it!

Hi my name is Mr. Williams.

Frostbite was thrown back onto the ground from the attack. He looked up to see the massive farmhand charging at him, his green eyes flaming with rage. Thinking fast, ?Green? fired two ice-shots at Big Mac's forelegs, stopping him in his tracks. Growling, he angrily stomped his hooves on the ground to shatter the ice.

So i guess Green made a fast recovering? To be fighting Big Mac?

Muahahahaha! NOW FINISH HER!

1 you probably just summed up my first time i watched saw
Except i was forced to watch it all
2 my name is what my name is who my name is shady daze.

That aside overall great chapter though the scootaloo/shady thing semmed rushed unlike everything else
Stay sharp
Cpj signing off

Hopefully Lyra doesn't get any ideas from that kiss. Would be very disappointed in her if she decided to leave Frostbite for another mare.

Jokes aside, this was a good chapter. Like the fact that stuff's getting more serious after all that fluffy loving. I just hope this story doesn't turn GrimDark.

Frankly, I feel the Scratch would be the kind of mare to do something like that.

i for got to say to write more! and my fav pairing is pinkiexpokey you should do a chap on them!

well i really like this fanfic but the thing is that you kinda made frosty a bit of a gary stu [male verison of mary su which is when an character is too perfect] soo you sould work on making less perfect and give him more flaws like make him cheat on lyra or something like that

At first I was going to say something like I've seen this before. But the truth is, every author does something to make each scene special. And well, I'm not sure which part was your rendering, maybe the film part. So after all that, I'd say that this was worth reading. Ha, don't let your fans down; you've got plenty of them. Looking forward to your next update!

-Trigr

I love this story. My favorite part was when I found out that Noteworthy play the saxophone, being a saxophone player myself, I was like, "F*** YES!"

I know the feeling about having very few people giving reviews on your story, it happened to me for quite a while.

But don't worry, the more you write the more people will read and review, so just keep it up.

Lastly, this chapter was very dramatic, and long, just the way I like it!

You one of my fav authors keep doing what your doing

This review has been left to let the author know that I give a crap about this story.

Also, that he has an awesome story and he should continue to write it.