   CityOfFallenAshes 5/27/12 . chapter 3Why have you not updated in so long? -commands you to write more- |
| CrispyBread 3/7/12 . chapter 3 Woah... 0_0 cool |
| 2featherbraids 3/6/12 . chapter 3 Actuly I think it's a pretty acurate look into his head. |
| Leafheart12 3/6/12 . chapter 3 He needs to be neutered.
LITTLE GIRLS?
Oh god. |
| Leafheart12 3/6/12 . chapter 2 Ninja?
*faints.* |
| 2featherbraids 3/5/12 . chapter 2 I was having a problum a little while ago where it wouldn't let me log in or review. Great chapter. I thimk you have a thing for this. |
| DANY96 1/11/12 . chapter 1 can't wait to read the next chapter:) |
| 2featherbraids 1/7/12 . chapter 1 Oooh. Update soon! I kinda of was thinking that the last line sounded a bit like a Miroku wanna be... |
| Leafheart12 12/29/11 . chapter 1 Story alert, this gonna be funn...
XD |
| vampirediaries95 12/28/11 . chapter 1 This story would be better if it was wrote in normal paragraphs. |
| CrispyBread 12/28/11 . chapter 1 Hey! not bad for a first chapter! |
| HalfDogDemomGirl 12/27/11 . chapter 1 This is gonna be an awesome story! I can just tell. But you might want to stop doing the straight down wwords and just riieght normal paragraphs :) oh and I was totally pictureing the guy as a Miroku wanna-be! |
| AM78 12/27/11 . chapter 1 Normally I'm not really into poetry, and to be honest I'd prefer this story was written the normal way, but I gotta say this is okay for what it is. There arn't too many M&S stories around here, at least ones that arn't AU, so it was nice to see something like this. I can tell it has some potential and could go pretty much anywhere depending on what you want to do. A decent start overall. |
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