Smith must have been jealous a lot when she choose Neo over him. Please write a sequel soon! This is the best Matrix series I've ever read!

Wow. Ouch. Wow...

OK, you're more than a marvelous writer. You're a frickin' marvelous writer. :-) I worship your plotbunnies, and thank you that one bit me in the ankle because of you. (grin) I was happy at the time, I just can't put smiley faces into author's notes. (grin)

I especially like lines like this:

"If Agent Brown had been human, he would have considered getting very, very drunk."

Sorta like watching through their eyes...which is a creepy enough concept.

LOVELY work!

Depressing stuff. The image of the Crypt is particularly haunting and the Special Agents are an intesting concept.

Gotta feel sorry for Brown though...