Coolness... Please write more. I like the way this story is going. It flows very well. I hope you update soon!

I've yet to finish chapter five, but I am really loving this... please keep writing? It's really good!

Wow, very nice! I cant wait for her to kick-*ahem* Sorry, almost said something I probably shouldnt have. I think I most defianatly will be back for more!

Dundundun! Update soon! This is good!

-Es-

WOOHOO! BARFIGHTS!

Um...good? lol

w00t! Good ch! Black lipstick is the shit!

This is good! I love the way you had Rebecca die...very realistic. Onward to next chapter!

-Es-

love it. :-D and man, what a cliffhanger! :( ur evil. in the uncomplimentave way ;)

glad to see my spark isn't being mwasted. ;-D

quality is good. :)

This is terrific. Female character, both sympathetic and believable. Prose both simple and elegant. Obvious thought has gone into the narrative structure. An engaging story. This doesn't happen enough in this fandom. Beautiful.

e! wow! cool! moire! loved the finger trick! and is she just clavoyent for nick related instinances? more! hurry.

Thank you for the update. I'm glad you're feeling better. With that said, more please!

I coulda sworn I asked for more. I can't wait no longer.

Spspank spou. More please.

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Translation: Thank You!

That was great I can't wait for the next chapter