Ooooo sisiuuuuuus suuspicionnns of your friends not goood

Haha that was like so uhm likeable ;) but alex this was so funnnnny!

Oooooooooh!
Ta much for the new chapter mon leetle Pally!

Hey, since you're in Pottermore, can you tell me how to get past Diagon Alley in Book One? I've been asking every fanfiction author I've met who's on Pottermore (well, actually, you're the second) but I got nothing that works. Any advice?

I like the idea a lot. The chapter name suited the chapter perfectly and I also liked the way you used each marauder and Lily's POV. There werent any SPaG mistakes either. Good work and keep updating :)

I thought this was a good start to your fic. You set up the four marauders quite nicely, and I like how you incorporated Snape's memory to make it canon-compliant. As for critique, it is a bit strange that there's no mention of Peter or Remus since you've already placed them in the compartment. I'd suggest throwing in a line or a reference of them. There's no need to give them lines, just a mention. But, if you like keeping the memory intact, that's understandable. Also, I'd fix the spelling of Marauders in your title. Overall, good job.

I have A POTTERMORE acount too! I'm a ravenclaw too too! :)

Oooooooh!

QUICK! QUICK! QUICK! NEW CHAPTER!

... And I also have a Pottermore account!

SNAP!

NNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! a cliffy! Damn you to hell! No, wait! If you go to hell you can't update...*thinkng, thinking, thinking* well damn...

Okies NEW PLAN!

*begs* Please update! *grovels at feet* pwease? with a cherry on top?

Ahahaha great story please update soon!

The story is going really well, and I really enjoy reading it! Hurry up and update soon!

I love this story! It has a great plotline and very few mistakes (Don't worry - not including Peter's letter!). Don't just let it go - it's brilliant!

I’d say make the chapters longer, but other than that AWESOMENESS! Then again, what isn’t awesome with the Marauders?

And I'm back! Awesome chapter and I am less bored now. Thank you. Guess what? I got a phone!

Yummy, chocolate. I need that at the mo. So bored, I'm now writing Alice in Wonderland fics. And I can't put them on cause my computer got taken away from me. Again. Any people reading this, for example Strazza, StormageddenDarkLordOfAll, animemonkey13, Sashaxh, Taylor and Emma, I am sorry. Really. Truly. Am.

Cool