Desert Crossing is one of my all-time favorite episodes, and you did well with this, thank you.

If Soval were here now I think I would just pull at his ears and make a knot with them.

And the lesson for the day is: don't mess with Malcolm! Nice one, thanks.

*Applauds* Fabulous! I have to tell you, I so wish that last part had been in the actual episode( yeah, I know. I say that a lot), thank you.

Favorite line: I hadn't imagined that a real friendship could be so wonderful.

I still ask myself where are those Sulibans now, if they'll be all right. Both Travis and the Captain share my worries, even if the Captain thinks it's been a good idea to free them nonetheless. I agree, but what will they do now? Is there a hope for them or will they keep being someone else's hostage?

It's too bad that they never really did a follow-up on that. Fantastic chapter (can't wait for 'Vox Sola'), thanks!

Yay, you're back! That was very enjoyable (and to be honest, I like this episode better than most fans), thank you.

Great line:"Are you expectin' me to keep this ship on the road by pedaling, Cap'n?"

What a funny image!

Absolutely wonderful, especially Malcolm's line at the end. Thank you!

"I understand that we will reach the Arachnoid Nebula tomorrow, Commander." I told him yesterday. We were having lunch with Travis too, so I preferred to be formal.

"Malcolm, next time you call me Commander off-duty I'm goin' to take all the power from your beloved weapons!" he drawled back with a smile.

Great lines. These two are worth more than a million bucks to me, thank you!

You did a wonderful job with one of my favorite episodes. And those last two lines are priceless, thank you!

You did a fantastic job with this, thank you!

Excellent, thank you very much!

Well I'm enjoying it immensely. You already know about a couple of changes I would make through private message but they are small indeed!

Carry on the good work.

Fury

I have to say, you did a great job writing about what most fans consider to be a lackluster episode. Thank you!

That was excellent! By the way, if you're looking for a beta reader, may I suggest Fury Seven Kerrigan?

I love all the chapters so far, but using hyphens instead of quotation marks for dialog is very distracting. Do you have a reason for using them that will become apparent later?

Fantastic! 'Silent Enemy' is one of my favorite episodes, and you did a great job with it, thank you!