It's very fairytale-like. Love all the description and the tone at the beginning.

Gorgeous.

Great. Awesome.

This is really good, though I must admit, I feel as if Anthy's feelings have a slightly different aim. Yes, she's not the innocent princess we thought her to be. But there is less hatred for Utena in the beginning, and instead there is pity. I kinda skim read this, so maybe you said that, but... Also, in the beginning, Himemiya wasn't a princess to Akio, because she was his sister. The show clearly states that, and that's a major theme, that Akio couldn't be her prince, and so she needed someone else. Plus I think that Akio's whole approach to Anthy is kind of off. Sorry.

But don't think I'm saying it's bad. I don't think that at all.

Pretty good job!