Absolutely love this story! PLEASE return to writing this.

You're better at writing Dexter than the orginal author, Jeff Lindsay. I don't joke either; don't b
Get me wrong Lindsay is amazing at writing, but you leave me desperate for more and more and more. I love all the Dex and Deb scenes, every single one and your other Dexter work, 'Down on the Upside," was likewise spectacular. 1st person writing is definitely something you ought to stick with.

Please, PLEASE, return to writing this- every inch of this story leaves me wanting more. I'd get down on my knees and beg you for more, but I can hardly do that in front of my laptop- I'd look like an idiot. I understand that your busy, but please think about returning to this.

Have you ever thought about being an actual author? You'd do really well.

I can only hope season 8 comes close to what you've explored with this ff so far. Keep up the good work!

Why did you stop posting? This is such a great story, you really should keep going, I would really enjoy it!
Oh my gosh, i can't believe in how in love Dexter is for Deb, it's so cute, actually, they are perfect for each other, and you make it seems so... right, inevitable, like fate, it's beautiful to read.
I think I am going to read your other Dexter story, it's probably as good as this one.
Pleassseeeee, end this fic, it does not deserve to be abandoned like this!

PS: Sorry for my fucked up english.

The Jackal sounds just like Ra's Al Ghul, did you get the inspiration from there?
I am realy enjoying the story, and, believe me, its a sacrifice to read it, since I dont speak english fluently, but i really think that worth the effort :)

This story is amazing, I'm loving it!

OH MY GOD, this is just SO GOOD!
I read all of it without any pauses, I was picturing everything in my head, I was enjoying every words, every second of it, this is how good you fic is! And your characters' development is amazing! Please keep writing it, please! You can't stop something as awesome as this fic, it shoud be forbidden.
I'm such a fan of Debra and Dexter relationship, and you made it so strong, so right, so real and believable.
Just BRAVO!

It's a shame that this story has been abandoned. It's so well written and I'm enjoying the developing relationship between Deb and Dex. The characters, pace and story; everything just comes together perfectly.

I hope you have a change of heart and return to this fic sometime.

Very interesting, some part of me doesn't know what to make of this, the rest is hoping for more.

that's... deep

Can you say: Retarded. Loved that pun.

good

Woah...story is well thought out.

That's some fucked up shit...

woah!