i'll only say this: I NEED MORE! i hope you understand:)

please write more chapters soon, it is really good!

it's not Juana it's Pilar

I like it a lot and can't wait for more!

i really do like the story and I am not sure if you changed the names in the story intentionally or not but the last name in the movie for brendan is conlon and manny's wife is pilar...i'm hoping tommy will beat up rick soon because it sounds like rick is gonna be punching on Aud soon if not already.

loving the story but the last name is spelled wrong is spelled riordan

Finally, a new chapter! and a nice one at that. Looking forward to the next one. and I will check out that Snow White story. (i Haven't seen it yet, but my dad has, and he loved it)
Cregga

I just found this story and I completely love it! :)
Can't wait until you update :)

Loving this story ! Keep going I can't wait to see what happens !

I love this story update soon!

Wow well as I always say when I'm trying 2 be funny... Shit just got real. I personally would love 2 read a fight sence where Tommy beats the shit out of this man, do u think u can make that happen?

prefect chapter. Glad you're back. Looking forward to the next chapter.

and dodn't be afraid to draw events out, to lengthen the time. You have a nice rhythm, a good flow. Keep it up.

Cregga

I need more! I like the fact you keep it short and simply.

YES!THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUU FOR THIS CHAPTER!

I've been dying to read more!Ok,so Audrey is a big girl,but that doesn't mean that big girls won't get in trouble either.

Ahhhh God okay I just watched Warrior for the first time this weekend and I'm in love with the movie as well as the characters, and I gotta give u ur props ur story is great so far and I cant wait 2 read more so update again please!