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Vixen Uchiha 5/20/12 . chapter 1
I can find tons of harry is a natural at Occlumency I want to say ours is the first where he is a natural at Legilimency. I have to ask will the dairy be a factor as ginny has a close friend.
stormingnight 3/16/12 . chapter 1
wow... accidental legilimency? awesome and love how you did the ginny/harry moment great way to start off a story.
anthony37 3/5/12 . chapter 1
Good fic so far how about updating it and showing Hermoine etc getting punished
hgforlife 12/31/11 . chapter 1
Looks like a promising fic. Is it complete AU or is it canon with different circumstances.

Looking forward to next chap
flight.of.the.phoenix.86 12/30/11 . chapter 1
interesting story!...i think u shud add some friends from Slytherin like Daphne Greengrass and Blaise Zabini so that Harry have a different perceptions...

update soon!
DukeBrymin 12/29/11 . chapter 1
Intriguing beginning, looking forward to more.
VizeerLord 12/29/11 . chapter 1
am going to need more...some filler in the last three paragraphs at least.

it was a good teaser/opener. now we need a few chapters on the reactions to the cannon issuses...

more please
sbmcneil 12/29/11 . chapter 1
Very interesting story. I like how well the characters are written. It would be interesting to see more of his interactions with others once he realized what was going on. I was surprised that it was set in Harry's second year, I had thought it would be later, but it made it a bit more interesting. The only problem I had is you put legitimacy for legilimency during the story, although you spelled it correctly in the author's note.
justWritingAT 12/29/11 . chapter 1
Lucky that I chanced upon this. This sounds like a promising fic. Do keep it up.

PS: Happy new year!
Katzztar 12/28/11 . chapter 1
"Do you know what legitimacy is?"

Uh one question, wht is it spelled like that when in your notes you spell it correctly legilimency. Is it a mistake that wasn't caught or was it because Harry found one book and it had the word mispelled in it?

Also that last line really raises elebrows, "And because Ron had truly been his best friend." I thought that earlier Harry thought that best friends would not accept money to be a friend.
Comet Moon 12/28/11 . chapter 1
the start
kiwifan13 12/28/11 . chapter 1
An interesting beginning :) I look forward to reading more!
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