Oh, very sweet. And I like the ending, them falling asleep together. Head on chest.. awww!

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CrimsonCat

dang. very cool

awww! i have this big goofy smile on my face. that was so cute! so sweet! so "awwwww!" if you know what i mean...

some great lines. i enjoyed it!

Ahhh! That was great! Are you SURE that was your first fic? Fantastic show of emotions of both parts. Right on the money. Hope to read more from you soon. :) :) :)

This was a very sweet story. Definitely an accomplishment for a first ff. The characterization was very well done. I've always thought it would be nice to have Marguerite share that particular incident from Cave of Fear with Roxton and am pleased to have seen it done with such care. I look forward to reading more from you.

OH! This was so cute!

Sorry I know some people hate that word, but AHH! I loved it!

It was really a great story, you should be very proud of yourself. You have a talent for this writing thing, lol.

I look foreword to seeing more stories from you in the future, so keep up the great work!

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awwwww, that was such a sweet story. You did a wonderful job writing it. I loved the ending, her head on his chest...

Hi, this one is much better developed than the Avebury one. Good thought development, action follows through, good characterization, very true to the characters on the show, and everything consistent with the details presented on TLW. I enjoyed reading this very much. Hope you will continue to write stories to share with the rest of us!