   Karla12309 3/3/12 . chapter 1well nicely done, you need to work on your punctuation but thats all i can say. nicely done :)
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| Kosmic 3/1/12 . chapter 1 I like and support this pairing. I also like how this story is going, update soon please. |
| Lillianna Rider 1/28/12 . chapter 3 Awesomeness I NEED MORE PLEASE UPDATE! |
| The Cutters Pain Ann.Z 1/26/12 . chapter 3 Pretty good! |
| Dbztron2 1/26/12 . chapter 3 sweetness. keep it up. |
| SallyOn 1/26/12 . chapter 3 I like the inclusion of Daniel's background into your writing. It is shaping up to be an intersting story. |
| GGCharms 1/25/12 . chapter 3 Yes so Daniel is going to have a bad past! I'm so happy! I hope my review makes the pain in your teeth lesson into a dull ache! This really is a awesome story! Please update soon! :D |
| GGCharms 1/24/12 . chapter 2 Oh please involve Daniel torture! I'll love it even more than I do now and that's a lot! Please update soon! :D |
| The Cutters Pain Ann.Z 1/23/12 . chapter 2 I love it! |
| Lillianna Rider 1/23/12 . chapter 2 AWESOME! and do put a dark past! |
| SallyOn 1/23/12 . chapter 2 I'm glad you took my suggestion - I think it will be a great story! I like what you've written so far! |
| SallyOn 12/29/11 . chapter 1 It read like a good beginning, and it would make for an interesting story! |
| The Cutters Pain Ann.Z 12/29/11 . chapter 1 I liked this story, I'm horrible at writting long chapters. I allways rush to the big parts. Ann.Z |
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