Hey, ive already revied this but your story is brillient! There need to be more stories about Jake. Same question as someone else, but how old is jake in this? :)

I like the ending :) Just a question how old's Jake in this? Brilliant :D

"He's..." Pete took over from Karen, who seemed to be unable to explain this to her children. Just thought I'd point out that it's Sue (at least I think it's meant to be...) :) Awesome :D

NO NO NO NO NO! Poor Jakey! :( Great story and writing though :)

This is really Good

I jumped about when i saw that another chapter was up. I didn't realise how much i wanted to know what would happen next.
Well done XD

This is such s good story! :) Awww poor jake, he always gets the worst of things! :( PLEASE dont just leave it there! Write another chapter?

AWESOME! EXCELENT! BRILLIANT!

NO! You can't end it there! You're still continuing this, right? It's only two chapters long but I'm hooked!

good but how does it end

I was getting so hooked in and then you stopped please write more you've really managed to get the character's personalities :)

awesome story, very different to get angst like this in an outnumbered fic. Very well done XD

Hey! I'm a really big fan off outnumbered and fanfics so finding this one was just amazing :) I've only read the first chapter and already want to keep reading :D Keep it up :)

Oh poor Jake! Of course he'd be the one injured (I don't know why he just seems to be the suffering one in their family). Nice to see Karen and Ben worried about their older brother and how Pete is unable to tell them whats happening. Looking foward to the next chapter!

PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!