| Reviews for: The Day From Hell - Page 1 of 2 |
 SinuousFun-Keeper of Innocence 5/18/12 . chapter 1Aw! I fuking loved this mini-series. So, how is the inspirational story, that is the story that made you dedicate this. |
 WhyTheCagedBirdSings 5/16/12 . chapter 1Well there I go again. You have no idea how heartbreaking some of this fic was. My heart felt so much pain for Naruto. I was actually crying so much that I couldn't read the last piece of the story, my vision was so blurred. It had me grinning like an idiot in the end though, so it was worth the tears. |
 Garmiet 4/10/12 . chapter 1Doesn't sound like Naruto has the greatest godparents. "I like it better when you guys are drunk. (*shudder*)" X I'm used to seeing Jiraiya gruff but with affection. Same goes for Tsunade. This is ... I'm a little alarmed about why they're actually trying for an affectionate breakfast. "Stowed the 'tude for five minutes." It would probably help if you did the same, dude.
I almost thought there was some of that gruff affection in the first story. He sounded worried that Jiraiya might've died, but was that just because he's dependent? Judging from the A/N earlier, I'm guessing they're going to give him the "You're not allowed to be gay" scene... Watching the ducks. My favorite bird ever. ) really don't know if Tsunade was TRYING to be helpful or not.
"Closet activities". Literal ... and metaphorical? I've still got a thing for a guy being tugged over by his tie. Love that.
Damn. They're determined. Oh. I guess that's something that can't be avoided... Okay, that REALLY sucks. "The solution he's sure to come up with." Damn it. Not this time. Jeez. Is ... is he abusive or just really crude? Certainly offensive. Definitely abusive. Why the hell are they his godparents?
Through the bedroom window. Cute. They live in Canada. (*sniff*) Now I want to cry. I'm such a damn lightweight when it comes to this sort of stuff! T_T
I still like this sappy stuff when it's written well. And written well this story is. Sasuke's so nice. "Being broken and being born all at the same time." Cool analogy.
Naruto woke up early but he missed the bus? How'd that happen? รต. That come on ... was rather out of the blue. Sounds like more than just one bad day here.
I hope to god Sasuke's trying to set something up to help Naruto and isn't just avoiding him so Naruto won't test him again.
The fuck? How is that even possible? That SUCKS, not seeing him that long. Sasuke, whatever you're up to, it better be good. (I'm going to guess that he's going to move to Japan, or try to arrange something so Naruto can stay there.) That's the Itachi I know-man of few words and rarely gets his meaning across.
"Looking at me as if he'd never seen me before." Damn right.
"Door was yanked open by his brother, who had a piece of toast clamped between his teeth and was buttoning up a dress shirt." SO! FREAKIN! CUTE! LOVE THAT IMAGE! 8D :heart::heart::heart: Naruto's going to need a new laptop. Or not. Man, that thing is tough. Didn't think that was possible.
"You're a fag." (*blinks*) And that's news to you? Seventy-five. Shit on toast. Damn it. I'm amazed Naruto's alive. So Jiraiya HAD been cool at some point in time. He's kind of a dick now. What the hell happened? Suicide? (*blinks again*) There was a lot more going on than I imagined. So ... Jiraiya HAS been worried about Naruto... Don't get why he ... isn't at least CIVIL to him, though. take it that Jiraiya doesn't approve of Naruto liking men, but isn't super phobic about it. Hard to say.
"That's al u care about. Fuck u." "*all" Nice touch. LOL AT THE :'( ! XDDD CAN'T PICTURE SASUKE TYPING IN THAT! Seriously, Sasuke, WTF is that shit? TALK to him!
Hmm. I'm guessing Sasuke's the one who sat down. Let's se Yup! And the guy's got nerve to grin like that. I guess he does have a bit of a mean streak to him. Unless he wasn't telling Naruto about this so Naruto wouldn't get his hopes up. "I can tell he's trying not to laugh at the look on my face, his grin is so wide." There's an extra set of quotes at the beginning of that sentence. And there's another extra one right before "I'm Sasuke." )
Kind of unbelievable that Sasuke was able to pull all this off, even with help from his bro. Japanese in a month, NUH-UH. NO WAY. "Because I threatened to run away." And Itachi just gave in to that? I think not. The Nara family! Not what I'd call "nice" from the manga-verse, but this isn't the manga-verse; this is a universe brought to us by dmnq8. ) More like severaly days from hell. Grrr, NO SEXY! :'( Ah well, wasn't really expecting it, but man what a tease, leaving me with that line.
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Alright! This one kind of had some drama-from-nowhere. And it was getting a bit predictable: Kind of reminds me of some yaoi manga I've read. Not that I don't enjoy that kind of thing, but it doesn't give me much to think about. And usually I just go through those kind of stories for the porn that eventually comes up or is mixed in.
Still ... it was fun to read and see all the cute moments between Naruto and Sasuke. Naruto was a bit too, erm, "uke-ish" to me in some of these scenes. Something I'd expect more from a girl than from a guy. |
 Dattebayo1987Chan 2/12/12 . chapter 1The last one? Well, crap. I loved this little series. I read them I don't know how many times. They cheer me up and give me hope on bad days. The happy endings make me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. The humor in the stories is also wonderful and makes me laugh.
It really sucks it's the last part, especially since you were getting to the good juicy stuff. Hehe. I was a little surprised they were only 14-15 though. But maybe a sequel after a little time-skip? Hehe. Oh, well, if you ever continue for some reason or other, you bet I'll read it.
Thank you for writing and sharing the story! |
 Kaila Azroth 1/29/12 . chapter 1Wuah! That was so sweet, cool, sad partly when Naruto was depresssed, but obviously so great! Loved everything about all the stories. |
 MelanisticLeopard 1/21/12 . chapter 1Ahhh the ending saved it all. What a great series! I loved it! Were they really only 14?
Man, that was so dramatic. It made me really sad & yes, depressed, when I read about what Naruto was going through. If the writer is good enough I'll feel what a character is feeling. huggles Naru Had to sell my phone, my laptop, everything. -realistic |
 richon 1/12/12 . chapter 1really great stories, i had a great time reading this 3 one shots. you did a great job! the plot is awesome !will you write more sequel ? |
 XxXaishiteruXxX 1/9/12 . chapter 1Horribly enough, Naruto's behaviour in that month reminded me of someone who just went to Japan for three weeks, and whom I miss terribly. And I'm so tired that I burst into tears and had to take a break when it got to going to Sasuke's house, lol. Ah well, 'twas a good fic nonetheless.
editing time
Maybe I expected to much from him, given how suave he normally is... *too
"Just thought I should introduce myself," he says quietly. "I can tell he's trying not to laugh at the look on my face, his grin is so wide. "Seeing as we're going to be on this plane awhile. "I'm Sasuke, Konoha High's newest exchange student." Lol, what happened with the quotation marks before 'I' and 'I'm'? |
 Ruka-x3 1/6/12 . chapter 1YES! oh my goodnessss, just so much yes! I love this! :3 This little series of fics was my fave xD They were all soo cute and just aiudhaikfjn loooove it foreverrrrr. You will forever be amazing :') |
 kittydarko 1/2/12 . chapter 1*heavy sigh* i just adore happy endings (since that is what i want more than anything in the manga - just a positive ending, with things wrapped up). you have a righteous talent for not making their love for each other seem "mushy" in any way. love that, cuz it warms my heart like crazy |
 mistralle 1/1/12 . chapter 1Sweet, a bit funny, a bit romantic. Yes, i think it was clear from the very start that Sasuke will follow Naruto to Japan. A bit reckless I think, but so Sasuke-like xDD
And as for Jiraya - I suppose he's very realistic character. Even real parents are not supposed to be understanding, and as for godparents and foster parents - why, Jiraya i nearly a saint here!
and I feel sad that this story is now finished. |
 LucciKun - Hikaru 12/31/11 . chapter 1Either you left us many hints, or i'm starting to think like you because halfway through, i knew that Sasuke would do exactly what he did on the plane. It's probably the former, but i prefer to live in my delusion that i'm starting to think like you :)
Anyways, it's really kinda sad that there wont be anymore of, as i call it, 'The Day Saga', but oh well. Ok, so this was really great! It's kinda sad knowing that Naru, Jiraiya, and Tsunade aren't really close in this fic, but at least they're not COMPLETE homophobes. And is it just me, or does it seem like there is a reason Jiraiya is the way he is?... Meh, probably just thinking too deep :P |
 ANIMEFREAK801 12/30/11 . chapter 1AWWW! X3 Happy endings make me smile! And Jiraiya was an sshole in the beginning but he kind of redeemed himself when he showed that he cared for Naruto! Then Sasuke showed up on the plane when Naruto started crying and GAAAH! CUUUTE!
Aaaaaahhh! :3 This made me happy! Thank you for writing it!
Your Forever-Fan,
Nina |
 Girl Who Changed Her Pen Name 12/30/11 . chapter 1kjfghsdkgdfkghdf /unintelligible blabber.
I need to tell you, first and for most, that Jiraiya pissed me the fuck off. I absolutely LOATHE intolerant homophobes and their stupid, nonsensical ideologies. So the fact that you evoked anger is nice, believe it or not. Nowadays, fanfiction of any fandom doesn't really get me going. But of course Jiraiya would be proud of Naruto anyway, of course! It's so sweet; especially in the manga, because Naruto and Jiraiya have an amazing relationship together and it really breaks my heart to know that that no longer exists. So yay for Jiraiya :D
Also, that disgusting breakfast Tsunade made sounds appealing to me omg I'm horrible D:
Anywhoooo, poor Naruto. Even though Sasuke had good intentions, I know the pain of being ignored by your loved one. So it sucks mad dick (and not in a good way).
But in the eeeeeeeeeend - "I can't wait to be inside you." AJJJHKFGFKJFJJJJJJJJJJJJJ THAT IS SO DAAAAAAAH I DON'T EVEN KNOW. It's funny, cute, sexy, funny, FUNNY. It's like, I get that feeling of my insides twisting up in giddiness and childlike happiness when I read that.
Thank you so much for these stories that you've written! Thank you thank you thank you. Every time you post them, I go read the reviews first. I like knowing what people say about your stories, especially since they're based on my dA journals. It's funny, do some of them even know that a lot of this stuff actually happened to me? XD
Again, thank you lots! I absolutely love the trilogy, and even if I'm not a crazy Naruto fan anymore, it still warms my heart to read about Sasuke and Naruto.
-Roya |
 Vladexx 12/30/11 . chapter 1Freaking awesome! I love how you get into the mind of a teen so bloody well! I mean seriously. I dont get how you do that lol.
And how brilliantly angst ridden it was yet secretly not but still!
And I love how you did Pervy sage in this! He was so adorable with his weak moment of care. XD |
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