Just a letle too confusing to be a fun read, but the happy ending makes up for a lot.

Abe

I did not understand but I am glad that Josh and Donna got married at the end... Great writing...

JENNIFER

This was so tough to read. I felt so bad. Lucky for you it turned out alright!

Okay, Sara is kind of scary in a stalker sort of way, and Josh and Donna are (if you'll forgive the irony) meant to be, but...I feel sorry for Sara.

Well, you had me fooled right up to the end ;-) Of course, when Josh finally makes Donna Mrs. Lyman, he will leave a lot of broken hearts: Mandy, Amy and Joey. Sara is just one more.

BenRG's Rating: 7/10

This had a very neat twist at the end. Nicely done!

Okay. So. Please tell me that what I think happened just happened, and that it was actually Donna he married, because I read the first half of it with nervous dread and I read most of the second half of it with, 'Well. Thank God it's not Amy' and then I got happy. Even if it wasn't Donna, by the way, it was good. I just happen to think that those two are Meant To Be.

Oh that's good - you had me there for a while. At least Josh & Donna ended up together. And I kept picturing Sara as Gina the bodyguard from the first season of the WW. Not sure why. :) Keep writing!

Loved the twist at the end. Please continue writing, I enjoy all your fiction

That was wonderful. I really like how you switched back and forth. I especially liked the fact that Josh and Donna ended up together, but I felt kind of sorry for Sara. Again, that was amazing.