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sawada 11/15/12 . chapter 2 please update i will like to know what will happen next |
princessayla15 3/5/12 . chapter 2oops misplaced the review in the wrong chapter...but PLEASE UPDATE! |
princessayla15 3/5/12 . chapter 1OHHH Please update! |
HibarixZhen 12/31/11 . chapter 2Arg...why they don't have in the one school? When will they visit tsuna? |
Kichou 12/30/11 . chapter 2Nice chapter. Update soon please. |
xXScarlatto-OokamiXx 12/30/11 . chapter 2hahaha i like this story you thought of its funny! |
xXScarlatto-OokamiXx 12/30/11 . chapter 1i like it :D hahaha their so obedient like tamed lions, loyal but still bite XD |
EK12 12/30/11 . chapter 2Interesting story! I would like to know more on who is their allies and who are their friends, he possible XD |
Taira-keimei 12/30/11 . chapter 2... That was really out of character. Hibari isn't acting like Hibari; Hibari would never show that much emotion, see TYL Hibari for example (he changed, but he is still the aloof cloud). Lancia isn't Lancia. There's no way Lancia can fit in one of those class, he's at least 15-20years older than Tsuna. He would never call Mukuro "Mukuro-sama", because he hates Mukuro and would NEVER go back under his command. Neither does he use "Tsuna-sama" to call Tsuna (I think it uses "Sawada"). If you want to make them OOC, then it's fine, but at least make some character development. If you only say it in one sentence, it's not believable; it would only feel like an excuse. I think you should do some research and try to make the characters more 3 dimentionnal and not just 2D. And I suggest you to break your conversations in multiple paragraph instead of clogging it in a long paragraph. |
Animefanatic-4ever 12/30/11 . chapter 2Interesting. I like it :) Is Lambo the same age as them since he is in middle school...or was is high school? Still, cant wait for the next chapter - |