  Zammy 7/26/05 . chapter 1 Same here! You need to continue this story and come to a conclusion! It sounds too good to be left back so plz put up next chapter soon! |
 Sweet Miyamoto 12/29/03 . chapter 1plz continue! I liked it too much to not knowing the end! |
| Sweet Miyamoto 9/8/03 . chapter 1 please continue your story.. _ |
| EMINEMGIRLXB 3/22/03 . chapter 1 yOU MUST WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER I REALLY LIKE THE STORY SO FAR |
| Butterfinger1 12/19/02 . chapter 1 Noone has reviewed for a while but I think you should continue it is a good story so far |
| AngryMew2 5/11/02 . chapter 1 ooooh. Jajl in the future, I can tell[sorry for the corny rhyme]. Anywho, you've got a good storyline going. Though, spacing and paragraph stuff like that could use some work. Keep it up and post chapter 2 soon please! Thanks! Bye! |
| Morbane 5/10/02 . chapter 1 You *really* need someone to help you edit out your spelling and grammar errors. An interesting idea though - a Team Rocket treasure hunt! Good! |
| Bill 5/10/02 . chapter 1 City Slickers 2 I see. |
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