I like this its hilareous and im really attached to this story now so pwetty pwetty pwease start writing NOW!

Keep going I what to know what happens to Len and Jack will Len fall in love with Skinner or not. Great story so fare

I'm very interested in the story (and I really loved how you started it of with the letter explaining the existence of another league member, very formal and scholarly sounding, really sparked my interest and also tied in well with the style in the comic) but I'm also a bit confused about the character of Lenore. She's got some magical talent, obviously, and it sounds like she's a time traveller. My question is, why is she there, or really, why is she "then?" Was there a spell and some sort of malfunction from that? Was she banished to the late 1800s while fighting demons? Is she there specifically to play some part in the destruction of the league for whatever time-lordy reason she was given? Why is she hanging out with Jack? Is Jack the real "Jack the Ripper?" Why is a fifteen-year old kid (who brutally murdered dozens of people?) trying to apprentice himself to a witch and demon hunter?

In all honesty, the character is very interesting (only partially because we share the same name) and I just wish I knew more about her.

That is all.