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While I enjoyed reading this, I wish it was longer. Please update as soon as you can! Also, in the first bit of this chapter, you put "heals" instead of "heels". I believe it was in Blossom's section right before she tried to go to Buttercup.

A very intriguing premise a very interesting coupling a very interested reader. Keep going-I'm waiting to see where it goes from here ;)

This is getting good! I can't wait to see what happens next, I love how you write and am looking forward to seeing how you turn this hate into a romance.

Intriguing! Love love love!

Ooh I've always wanted Chemical X! Haha I love this already and I like how you're not rushing into the romance in the first couple chapters.

This looks really interesting. I'm excited to read more. You might want to do a bit of proof reading. In the first bit of it, you wrote major not mayor. Also buttercup said "it's not like the books going to come to live!" instead of saying life.

This looks really interesting. I'm excited to read more. You might want to do a bit of proof reading. In the first bit of it, you wrote major not mayor. Also buttercup said "it's not like the books going to come to live!" instead of saying life.

I love it! Its interesting and now Im extremely curious. :)

Sounds like a really good plot so far! I'm glad you sent it to me. :) Can't wait to see what Him has got in store for our favorite girls. (Oh and I kept laughing at Buttercup's sarcasm. Fits her character well.)

This is a lot different from your original, it's not bad. I wonder how it will turn out. Until the next chapter, Ja-Ne! From: Soul-Girl! ,

i liked it cant wait for more

Definitely something I havent read before- I like it. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this, and thanks for letting me know about it!

I like where this story is going. Keep at it. :)

Hmmm, intriguing. Wonder what he's up to?