 asga 3/12/07 . chapter 1 I love all your stories esp: Ami and Zoicite, please I hope you continue the story |
 firegoddess372 12/23/04 . chapter 3This is a good fic. I can't wait to find out how Zoizite knew Kaliana. Please update ASAP please. |
 meeh2 11/7/04 . chapter 3A story that I will impatiently await your update. Your story is original and well planned and I hope that you will update soon. ) |
 BluLadyK 7/21/03 . chapter 3Awesome chapter. I love the new character, she's very kick ass. Maybe related to Ami somehow? Hmm...I can't wait to read the next chapter, please get it out as soon as you can. Till then, ja ne! |
 Aldrean Treu Peri 7/9/03 . chapter 3I'm glad you've updated again :) Kaliana is a beautiful name, by the way, I hope some questions about her will be cleared up as the story progresses. I'm glad Zoisite wasn't quite up to par in this chapter, other authors might have just set him back into action able to take everything on but it's certainly more believable the way you've written, and humorous as well. I'm eager to read more :)
Hugs, kisses and sweet *day*dreams Aldrean Treu Peri |
 Marni 7/9/03 . chapter 3 A very interesting story! Why are there no modern conveniences? I would like to think that civilization has not regressed during the time of Crystal Tokyo. |
 SailorPikaAngel 7/8/03 . chapter 3*points and screams*
IT'S AMI! IT'S AMI ISN'T IT!
*tilts head to side*
But I thought the senshi couldn't interfere... I KNOW! It's Ami's subconscious.. a female Ami-version of the White Knight...
And if it isn't Ami... SHAME ON YOU ZOISITE! Looking at another person besides ami! I say Kaliana should leave him in pain...
Kaliana sounds like such a mysterious person... who is she really?
*pouts* cruel person.. leaving us hanging...
But hopefully a new chapter will be up soon! |
 Callie 5/3/03 . chapter 2 I've been waiting for this update! hope to see the next chapter soon! great story! |
 Fireflyer56 4/13/03 . chapter 2I really like this story,you always have such origanal plotlines! I thought the proficies sounded good in french. Update soon! |
 Aldrean Treu Peri 4/13/03 . chapter 2Sounds good so far :) It's interesting to read a story where the generals aren't all welcomed back at once with open arms and loving forgiveness. I'm excited to see how Zoisite fares on his journey and how he accomplishes the necessary tasks to secure his redemption. Characterization is extremely good, reminds me of the manga, and I like the human nature I've observed in most of the characters, especially Zoisite. I hope you continue this before too long.
Hugs, kisses and sweet *day*dreams Aldrean Treu Peri |
 BluLadyK 4/13/03 . chapter 2Hm...you could have Serenity's test be the last one, and have it involve something with his love for/of Ami. Maybe create some illusion where she is in danger, or something. And in order for her to live, he has to die again. But he wouldn't be able to return ever again...so he must choose from the new life that he just aquired or an old love for someone who he betrayed, and refuses to acknowledge him. Just a thought..great chapter! Till the next one, ja ne! |
 BluLadyK 12/30/02 . chapter 1Wow! What a great fic! I love it! I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what kind of tests and trials Zoisite will have to go through. Please get the next chapter out as soon as you can! Till then, ja ne! |
 Miranda Aurelia 12/21/02 . chapter 1This is such a great story! Don't ever stop! Hey, when are you going to finish Shadowed, anyways? |
 Lena Sauran 12/8/02 . chapter 1Fabulous story, I hope to see more soon, very well written and and excellent idea, more soon please. |
 Artemis-chan of Redwing 10/6/02 . chapter 3Most interesting chapter. I really can't wait to see what kind of trials Zoicite gets put through. _ |