HI again! ^_^ I LOVED IT! I too, can only write depressed poems because I think that's the mirror of MY soul. Anyways see ya l8er! JA MATTE!

Alfeegi- Another one? Stop with the depressing poems already! Read something else!
Satanira- No! And now we're out of time and we have to go home! C'mon!
Alfeegi- *is dragged away back to Satanira's place* My life sucks.
Satanira- Hey, you're the one who was stupid enough to get caught! I just set the trap.
Alfeegi- ...

kool. i think your beat's a bit off, but kool. and don't trust my opinion either. i'm considered all-out wierd when it comes 2 poetry. i like the point it gets across though.

Oh yes write more. Pretty please. These poems are so good. I love a little sadness in my life, as well as happiness, laughter, drama, anger, silliness....

What the hell happened to all of your poems?!?!?! *searches frantically* Oh... Okay, I, as I've said, love this poem!!! Good luck with your Yu-Gi-Oh! game!!! ;) *hugs*
~Shade~