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update pwease? *puppy dog face*

good good *rubs invisible beard*

Funny

I LOOK EXACTLY LIKE SAIDE! COMPLETE WITH RED STREAKS IN MY HAIR!

i'm loling so hard right now! oooooooh the irony, oh man lol...

Really funny

LOLZ. But you know what would make this even better? Throw some gods into the mix!

Wow good story u do need more anubis but ur so funny

This is still really funny. :) I think Zia being confused with technology would be really funny. xD Especially if Carter tried to help her.

Anyway, keep up the good work.

-Different

LOL!

I'd choose Jackel :p forbidden love is so hot :D

Flying penguins :D lol