 sheneedsanewname 4/26/03 . chapter 1A very odd story. I like. |
 Redrum 1/18/03 . chapter 1Interesting.. I like the ending. |
 Blue Moon 6/30/02 . chapter 1 *stares wide eyed* That was..that was, um...
well I don't know.
But I do like how you used people talking in between the thinking, like the thinking brought up other memories. That was cool. |
 Amalin 5/14/02 . chapter 1I've waited all day to read this, and it was most definitely worth it. I did say that I like the wry humor in your recent work, but nothing beats the spine-chillingly sweet drama. You write absolutely beautiful fics of one reflecting on the other's death. After reading other reviews, I'd have to agree - Harry's calm thoughts are rather chilling, in a definite good way. And I love all the tiny influences Draco has had on Harry's life - the lights, the coffee. And you excel at the little details, the quirks that make characters real. I loved the title, the content, the characterization and the emotion - wonderful job. - |
 Perfect-Dark01 5/12/02 . chapter 1 Hmmmm...something doesn't seem quite right to me. I can't put my finger exactly on it. I think it might be the way you portrayed Harry. To me it seemed maybe just a little too calm, and it made him seem a bit spightful. I liked it though. You almost always have to like your work. See you at school. |
 5.0 5/10/02 . chapter 1 One shots make me depressed. Well written ones like these, and so short. Haunting and uncontinued. These are the reasons why they make me sad to read them. |
 bondagechic 5/10/02 . chapter 1OOOoooh! I love it! As usual, though, I must say there is something different about this little ficlet...It's really calm. Calm and calculated, rhythmic in a way. Yes...I really love this one! Your ever-changing style (or strangeness as you call it) never ceases to amaze me! Please write more ficlets! *grin* |
 Zany 5/10/02 . chapter 1Hate it? No... Definatly not hate it..
Different certainly. Effective. Original. In short. I liked, a lot!
Style and characterisation was effective.
All in all, great fic! |