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Reviews for: Pity Not Icarus
sheneedsanewname 4/26/03 . chapter 1
A very odd story. I like.
Redrum 1/18/03 . chapter 1
Interesting.. I like the ending.
Blue Moon 6/30/02 . chapter 1
*stares wide eyed* That was..that was, um...

well I don't know.

But I do like how you used people talking in between the thinking, like the thinking brought up other memories. That was cool.
Amalin 5/14/02 . chapter 1
I've waited all day to read this, and it was most definitely worth it. I did say that I like the wry humor in your recent work, but nothing beats the spine-chillingly sweet drama. You write absolutely beautiful fics of one reflecting on the other's death. After reading other reviews, I'd have to agree - Harry's calm thoughts are rather chilling, in a definite good way. And I love all the tiny influences Draco has had on Harry's life - the lights, the coffee. And you excel at the little details, the quirks that make characters real. I loved the title, the content, the characterization and the emotion - wonderful job. -
Perfect-Dark01 5/12/02 . chapter 1
Hmmmm...something doesn't seem quite right to me. I can't put my finger exactly on it. I think it might be the way you portrayed Harry. To me it seemed maybe just a little too calm, and it made him seem a bit spightful. I liked it though. You almost always have to like your work. See you at school.
5.0 5/10/02 . chapter 1
One shots make me depressed. Well written ones like these, and so short. Haunting and uncontinued. These are the reasons why they make me sad to read them.
bondagechic 5/10/02 . chapter 1
OOOoooh! I love it! As usual, though, I must say there is something different about this little ficlet...It's really calm. Calm and calculated, rhythmic in a way. Yes...I really love this one! Your ever-changing style (or strangeness as you call it) never ceases to amaze me! Please write more ficlets! *grin*
Zany 5/10/02 . chapter 1
Hate it? No... Definatly not hate it..

Different certainly. Effective. Original. In short. I liked, a lot!

Style and characterisation was effective.

All in all, great fic!
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