I loved it! Wicked job, I think the Cure From Hell just doesn't know what to think about Joe and Billy getting it on :P

it's nice but WE WANT MORE DETAILED SEX PLEASE

Nice to see someone else on here writing HCL fics. Well done, BTW, it suits the boys well.

After reading the first part, I was ready to dismiss this as poetic fluff, but the second part redeems it. I really like the last few lines of this. It's all very simple, but the combination works well.

Oh, thank you! Heh. I rather enjoy this piece myself...probably my self proclaimed favorite of snippets that I've written... lol. Anyway, thanks again!

M

fuck, that's some beautiful shit. pardon my french, but that's just my initial reaction to this wonderful little ditty. i commend thee on being a "fabulous" writer. *God* how good is this! i love it!

You are awesome. I'm going to worship you now. I love your use of language. (I'm currently taking three english courses. apologies for the dorky comment.)

you're right waking is only optional. Who wants to confirm to reality, when there's always another dream lurking under the covers...

Great story.