do you have any idea how few stories there are about Paul? you rock, seriously. this story is beautiful!

You really captured the essence of Paul's emotions...and the love and joy we receive from Jesus when we become His...

Wow, that is so good. Excellent job. Iwas touching to see the joy of someone who has just found Christ.

I love all of your "Bible" stories! Please, continue to write more! The Bible tells us the story that touches our hearts and gives us the basic information - all the information we need, actually - but I always love to read drawn out versions of such stories as the conversion of Saul/Paul. Good work!

this is truly beautiful! I love how you described his feelings so well. and I like the 'once I was dead; now I'm alive' thing. I can relate to that!

Wow. I love the way you take the Bible stories we have all heard at some time or another and retell them, without sacrificing the reverence or the Holiness of God. You know, I really appreciate having some solid Christian values out there, because even if it seems offensive to some, other people will love it. (LIKE ME!) I love your work. Pax Vobicum.

Thank you.

Wow, this is incredible! Very good work!

Apostle Paul is such an encouraging example as a Christian in my life. Your story was very well written and I liked how you described his joy in knowing Christ. Awesome! God Bless!

oh *wrings hands* so good! It sums alot up. _

Pretty good, a nice idealogy and a good song. But sometimes your descriptions of feelings are a little cliched...try and think about how it *really* feels, not just how one expects it to.