it's about time I review... I've had a busy week so that prolonged my review until the wonderful Saturday WHICH IS TODAY! I'm quite happy right now!

Now you'll have me coming back for the third installation... Take your time with it! Im sure it'll be fantastic as always.

signing off

booknerd95

OMG! I was LMAO the whole time! "Puberty!"

Update soon. I really liked the last chapter

I just had a Pirates of the Caribbean moment there... well done... I'll be waiting for the last chapter of this story and I;m happy that you've decided to stick with PJO... I want to see how Artie's life plays out.

booknerd95

dude, the plot is great and all, but i dont think many-a-people will actually read the whole story because of your overabundance of or gramatical errors. My advice to you(whether needed or not is for you to decide) is: get a BETA!

You know what I would like to read... some sort of back story for Artie... I'm getting bits and pieces but I would really like to see the whole thing in print... I've got most of the parts in my brain but it's just not the same.

Anyways... I'm sure you'll give us some more answers later on in the story. Can't wait for you to start the Titan's Curse because I really want to see how the Hunters react to Artie... that'll be an interesting plot right there... if you decide to continue Artie that is but then again it's all up to you... you're the author

booknerd95

Frankly, I'd like to see your Artie stories. I'm generally not a fan of OC's and AU's, but you do a FANOMINAL job at keeping me (and perhaps other readers as well) captivated on every second because you still keep the basic Percy Jackson plot-line, but yet, tie in another character to make things interesting and to mix things up. PLEASE continue on your Artie stories and update soon!

I think it's pretty obvious that Artie needs to get out into the world more often... the movies have rotted that kid's poor brain... how does Apollina (sp?) do it? she must have a lot of patience that woman.

First, I think you have to finish Artie's story first. I want to see how you wrap it all up.

Hahahha... Loved this chapter thoroughly... Especially the Finding Nemo quote... best quote of life... And the witty banter between the characters... I love witty banter and I don't read much of it.

Artie is acting just like I expect a teenage boy would act... thinking about food most of the time, much of it involving meat... That is like my guy friends all the time.

Keep those updates coming

booknerd95

OH MAN! Love Austin Powers! Funniest movie ever! I'm sooo happy that you put that quote in there.. This review is going to be short since I'm tired... Excellent work, there's nothing much I can say other than bravo! *clap clap* bravo

Can't wait for the next one!

booknerd95

Well that certainly was an interesting chapter... I think Artie is starting to show symptoms of that split personality disorder. Oh yes, and my cat is on my lap and he or she (haven't really decided what the little thing is yet) wants to say hi... Its purring is distracting me... same with the whiskers brushing my arm as I type this... It's really not helping any having this annoying but adorable thing on my lap.

I think I'm kind of glad Artie chose Lutar or whatever... big-scary-cat-person to help him escape... If he chose the whimpy dear, I think he'd be running scared at this point... STOP IT!... Stumpy (that cat) is licking my arm... not helping with the typing, little friend!

Anyways, I love the way you right. Can't wait for the next update.

Sincerely

booknerd95 and Stumpy

Kay... so Artie is definitely having some sort of side effects from being turned into a kitten/jaguar thing... I hope he gets it cleared up otherwise he'll go feral and cooky like... that's not a good thing.

I like how your story keeps me guessing. I'll be looking forward until your next review.

Until next time

booknerd95

PERFECT! My life is now perfect... Three reasons

1) It's March Break (for me anyways)

2) I totally bull crapped my way through two tests today

3) YOU UPDATED!

I'm glad that Artie is back to being his normal self... He's a very loveable character despite what other people say. He also had some angsty issues in the last chapter with his family... I wonder if you're going to bring out that subject more often since Artie seems to live in this type of world where he doesn't want to remember what happened to them...

Well anyways, can't wait until you update again... Your story is very gripping...

Until next time

booknerd95

EXCELLENT CHAPTER! Everything makes total freaking sense now... I'm also quite happy that you gave us some background info on Artie PLUS my cold medication is finally kicking in! It's such a good day right now!

Just a few grammar mistakes but other than that I am quite pleased with this chapter... Artie is also becoming less Gary Stu like which is good... I think he's progressing very well as a character

Keep up the good work and I can't wait until you update again

happy writings!

booknerd95

I'm so confused now! what is going on? what is happening?... AH! update faster please!