Hello! I really like this retelling of Cinderella, I think you really described well the prince's feelings throughout the story without doing too much (especially in the ball scene).

I like that you used french names for the characters even for Cinderella, I grew up with this version of the name so it was agreeable. It is also fitting since Cendrillon is a french tale.

I love as well the ending where so much emotion is pictured with few words. This is really great!

*sigh* Well written and romantic. I liked the flow, descriptions, the prince. Thank you for sharing this. :)