|Reviews for The Demon Within|
| AishaRotterdam 8/23/12 . chapter 1
So hot hot hot! BB I miss you and love this little O/S, good job! xxx
| roon0 4/28/12 . chapter 1
That was awesome hun. Very enjoyable. :)
| Madmum 1/4/12 . chapter 1
Thank you for posting this! I loved it.
| MissWinkles 1/1/12 . chapter 1
Hey there! Godaaaaaaaamn! God knows I loved this. Sweet, sexy, primal and kind I scary hot. Well done bb, nd happy new year! xxx
| princessnerra 1/1/12 . chapter 1
| Princess Mishawaka 1/1/12 . chapter 1
Very good. Now Edward knows just what he really is. He might be able to control himself some of the time but during this intimate moment he can't control himself at all.
really good writing
| Missy B Girl 1/1/12 . chapter 1
I loved this. Beautifully written, and leaves me wanting more. Thanks
| Beans827 1/1/12 . chapter 1
Suz! This is why I never should buy those compliations. I get them and then never really look at them or read them and I so MISSED this. This was really great. I loved how you transitioned from God knowing him to not knowing him at all. That was really powerful and very well done, bb! Really really great. Bravo, bb! Loved it. And I'm also glad Bella survived it. Thought she was gonna perish there for a moment. Great job though! And Happy New Year to you, bb! Let's hope this one is way better.
| BoydBlog 1/1/12 . chapter 1
OMG what a wonderfully delicious oneshot to see in my inbox! I LOVED it. The danger was palpable...you had me sooooo worried there for a minute I thought he'd completely lose it and not have the will to stop drinking.
Devilishly sensual writing... thank you for sharing sweets xxxx
| cocoalvin 1/1/12 . chapter 1
This really is a wonderfully written story, Suz. I loved it the first 'times' I read it and just as much, if not more, this time. It really moved me. Great work. S
| Pyejammies 1/1/12 . chapter 1
Beautifully written, BB. I like this distinctive style. Your story leaves us with something to ponder about the pair. Thanks, sweetie.