Ohmygod! You have Brick down pat! I love Brain!:)

And another highly worthy addition to the film. Once again, the tone is perfect, the plot fits in with everything else, the characters are characterised perfectly... I believe flawless would probably be the best term for this.

Yes! Yes! Yes! Thank you, God! Someone is finally writing fiction about this amazing movie! You captured the langage perfectly and it was incredibly suspensful all the way through. Please write more soon!

You are literally the only one to write Brick fanfic on this whole site. I'm so glad you did it well. You wrote this just as if it was the movie, added a little extra spin to the end. Love it.