|Reviews for Ben's Grilfriend|
| Guest 5/7/13 . chapter 3
There's been some mistake on this chapter I hope you can put it right because I wanna see what Bella's like good story
| flamboyant snake 8/4/12 . chapter 3
pretty good, but maybe you could break up the paragraphs a bit.
just its a bit hard for me to read (ive got glasses)
| Carrottop2 2/22/12 . chapter 3
I think this will turn out to be a very fun story.
Do you realize you uploaded chapter 2 twice? Also, maybe try adding more paragraphs. It makes the story a bit more easy on the eyes.
I love how Angela just turns up with the whole rain thing, and how Sue was getting obbessive with the counter-top. I can't wait to find out what Ben's girlfriend will be like! (Hopefully as 'interesting' as Ben!)
Please update sooon!
| Normal Girlyy 1/31/12 . chapter 1
I like the idea of ben having a girlfiend. Its never been before. Cant wait for the next chapter!Xx