There's been some mistake on this chapter I hope you can put it right because I wanna see what Bella's like good story

pretty good, but maybe you could break up the paragraphs a bit.
just its a bit hard for me to read (ive got glasses)
:)

I think this will turn out to be a very fun story.

Do you realize you uploaded chapter 2 twice? Also, maybe try adding more paragraphs. It makes the story a bit more easy on the eyes.

I love how Angela just turns up with the whole rain thing, and how Sue was getting obbessive with the counter-top. I can't wait to find out what Ben's girlfriend will be like! (Hopefully as 'interesting' as Ben!)

Please update sooon!

I like the idea of ben having a girlfiend. Its never been before. Cant wait for the next chapter!Xx