| Reviews for Odd Man Out |
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me 12/8/12 . chapter 1 here is a review! it was a very nice oneshot. im kinda depressed about how leo is forever alone though... |
Lillianna Rider 10/20/12 . chapter 1I love this... |
writergirl97 6/29/12 . chapter 1Wow. I love this. And does it sound cheesy if I say to him, we can be the odd ones out... together? ;P |
LeoValdezgirl77 3/16/12 . chapter 1awwwww. :( I WILL LOVE LEO! this made me feel so sad. I loved it in a bad way. it was awful. but amazing. great writing. sad story. almost made me cry. Leo's a deeper character then so many people make him out to be. you did him justice. and I thank you for that. |
kiwihead136 2/25/12 . chapter 1I read this a long time ago and didn't review, sorry! But I was thinking the same thing, Leo's the odd one out, and I love how you wrote it. (Although personally, I'm all for LeoxReyna, but that's just me...) |
zealousfreak27 2/16/12 . chapter 1That was really sad. Really, really sad. I lovve Leo too much for this. I ain't just a fangirl, I just think that Leo's the most developed character. |
Janetissherlocked 2/6/12 . chapter 1Leo don't be sad! U always hav me:D! I 3 Leo I feel so bad he's not paired off but idk maybe that's the point, maybe he's supposed to be independent but I still think he should hav some1 he's practically the ONLY new character I really like as much as the originals: -Leo: kicks ass, is funny & I love how he's not conventionally "handsome" -Jason: has got to be one of the BLANDEST characters I have EVER read. So boring. No personality -Piper: she is an annoying little bitch that I just want to stab with a fork. Cuz she's such a faux action girl. I mean, she acts likes she's above the other Aphrodite girls, then fawns over freaking Jason the entire time. I'm sorry sweetie, just because to don't like make-up doesn't mean ur hardcore. -Frank: I like him, I just don't LOVE him liked I loved nearly all the old characters. I like him cuz he's Asian (XD), & he's kinda awkward. He's not a conventional hero nor conventionally good looking (kinda like Leo, but Leo is better cuz he's like the 3rd Stoll both of whom I adore) -Hazel: she's alright. Kinda irritating, but a MILLION times better than piper. & her angst seems genuine, I mean a girl who caused her mother's death & the rise of a... Giant? Or a girl who angsts about her boyfriend, which angst seems reasonable? -Octavian: this guy as a rival will nvr beat Clarisse. Clarisse is to awesome to be trumped by this loser as the "rival". Annoying as hell, plus he kills stuffed animals. -Reyna: I barely know anything about her, & I already hate her. I mean she's cockblocking EVERYONE! This bitch has taken an interest in Percy; therefore, she is a percabeth cockblocker! NO ONE I REPEAT NO ONE COCKBLOCKS PERCABETH! (plot device Rachel dare cockblocked them enough, now we get this chickDX!) & on top of that she's cockblocking Jasper. Which I really don't give a crap about but I REALLY don't want to hear piper bitch & moan for another book just cuz Jason is hooked in a love triangle. (speaking of love triangles, this Leo/Hazel/Frank stuff is bullshit, cuz if riordon puts freakin LEO in a love triangle I will strangle him. In my opinion Leo should be with Drew - I know wierd but intriguing in an odd way - , Thalia, or Reyna (to stop all her effin' cockblocking))... -Oh & Drew? Riordon, y u hating on AsiansDx (joking but still)? She's not as impressive a rival as clarisse was but if riordon gave her some decent development like he did with clarisse I would like her a lot more now... So yeah, enjoy my rantXD... I liked ur story. Poor Leo... |
leo's little love 1/15/12 . chapter 1Poor leo he'll finda girl eventually…good story! |
lone green leaf 1/7/12 . chapter 1TTTT poor Leo. He's practically the only character I like starting from TLO. He's *almost* the only non-Mary Sue of the new characters compared to Piper and Jason. WHY RICK RIORDAN? WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE HIM THE THIRD WHEEL? :"C |
Lovely Lady Moon 1/7/12 . chapter 1Poor Leo, he's my absolute favorite character, and you are so right, he is always the odd man out :( Poor fella, wonderful writing though, I never really realized how 6 of the (hopeful) seven are couples... o.O |
XxWhitecapsxX 1/1/12 . chapter 1 I just love emotional Leo...and I feel seriously bad for him. He's always the Odd Man Out! (Hence, the title of this magnificent piece!) Thanks for making this! I swear, this is the only type of story (that's under Leo V.) that I will NEVER, EVER get tired of reading even if it's already cliched! - P.S. I always see you're comments every month ;). You reviewed imPERFECT by xXxDaughteroftheKingxXx right? |
Belieber99 1/1/12 . chapter 1 Awwwwwwwwww poor Leo! If u need sum1 i'll giv u a hug :3 |
Guest 1/1/12 . chapter 1 This is exactly what I've been thinking about ever since reading the Son of Neptune about how there's seven and there would be someone left out. And you put it into words perfectly. This is great :) |
Emily 1/1/12 . chapter 1 Really really great! I am so impressed! You did it wonderfully! :D |
dancinginthesunlight 1/1/12 . chapter 1aw. poor Leo. I actually never thought about this until now, but you're right that the seven heroes are all paired up except him... Well, there's always future books... |