this is quite clever.

do continue.

Amazing. This is just simply amazing. This is a very unique, very good story. You should be proud of this, you are one of the best authors in this section.

Sinister Shadow

100/10!

OOh wrath from beyond the grave!

I can't help but love that whole thing.

After all my favourite Yu-gi-oh monster is one that has the power to enact revenge upon her killers...or somethhing...yeah whatever...

anyhow I hope you write more.

You definetly have my attention. Keep going.

Very interesting so far! I'd definitely like to see more soon.

More! Post more! :) Good start. I'd like it if you could make Alloran more 'messed up'. after all, being with esplin for so long can't be nice.

Wow, cool. I don't totally get it, but I hope there will be more. :)

Hurry up and write the next chapter! gotta know what happens next!