 legendarytobes 2/13/12 . chapter 1Lovely! I think I've discovered a new favorite author and never even knew it. This is a great rendering of both how Clark and Lois could logically outgrow each other after one foiled wedding too many and how Oliver's famous wandering eye for Dinah might lead them apart as well. Still glad Flynn came of it and great call out to the Robin Hood actor :P
I really like the idea of gifts littered here and there, sometimes Clark as cupid to try winning her over. Also like the glimpses of Chloe as a harried mom working around her job and also feeling guilty for using the tv as a babysitter. I really enjoyed your work here. No one was demonized, no one was bitter or shrewish, just a natural progression of what happens when people are together for the wrong reasons or for reasons that can't last in the long run.
Thank you! |