| Reviews for The Dark and Light |
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4000kills 4/24/12 . chapter 1GAAAAH HOW COME I DIDNT GET THIS. D: oh well. i shall put on alert asasp ;D whoaaa tideborn and wraiths! i like ur idea :DD very different, which is really nice for a change. YAY IM A PRINCESS. AND A QUEEN. woohoooo XD a very big change from the real, lowly little psychic in the game loool. i like it :P plus i like the half-race idea. really cool(: write faster D: |
crazililwabbit 4/2/12 . chapter 1Thanks for taking the time to read and review my story! Thought I'd return the favor! I have to be honest, I have no idea what this is from... lol. But I did enjoy it! I will keep reading and I am sure I will learn what it's about more as I go! One tip - Maybe work on dicribing the surroundings a bit more... like what they're wearing, or where they are. I have trouble with that too. It takes practice. I always end up going back over my stories and adding a lot of that in. :) |