This is why I read fanfiction!
A great story - here giving a new view on things happening in the books - written by someone who can write very well.
Thank you!

I generally don't like the # of times/scenes/events/things/whatevers stories, but this? This is now part of my headcanon.
Thank you for that.

Great story! You definitely captured the voices of Elizabeth, Cromarty, and White Haven.

Very nice story and that is an understatement!

Okay, in the books, the BCs (battlecruisers) were Warlord-class, and the CAs (heavy cruisers) were Mars-class, along with two or three CLs (light cruisers) of unidentified class.

Excellent stories filling in the spaces between the books. Appeciate your efforts

This is fantastic. You know, if you submitted this to Baen, this short story might end up on the next Honorverse anthology.

So, are we going to see further news reports of her crazy exploits as she continues her rein of terror?

Love it

great fic

Really enjoyed that!

This does the Honor Harrington series PROUD! Pure delight to see Honor from her Queen's view, and utter happiness to see it written RIGHT. The characters are true and the writing reads as well crafted as the actual books. Write more on Honor!

nice read

Excellent, a brilliant look into the head of Queen Elizabeth the only regret is that it stopped so soon! Out of curiosity are you going to expand on this?

Really, really, really enjoyed this. Fresh take on the HH series, which is getting a bit stilted in writing style as of the last book (Mission of Honor). Particularly enjoyed White Haven's message in the last section ('Commodore, or Admiral, or quite possibly War Goddess Harrington' lol.) And you can use commas correctly, which is more than most FF writers seem to be able to do! One typo though, in that in the sixth-to-last paragraph, 'despatch' should be spelt 'dispatch', but that's just being picky. Keep it up!