For a 14 yr old, you write beautiful fiction. Don't listen to what these other bastards say. I love the way you write. It's a pairing that would work too, they have the same temperament. Once again, you shock us with your awesome skills! Don't let these other guys tell you otherwise. Keep up the good work, imouto! *hugs*

You say you're only fourteen. I only have one question for you-- what the HECK are you thinking? Honestly, if you have enough free time on your hands to write disgusting pieces such as this, you need to get a hobby. I'm known for being perfectly honest, and I won't lie to you to make your pathetically small ego any bigger...get a life.

It's nice to know there are other 14 year olds out there who write things that they shouldnt write # whistles innocently as Mina Sakura points out that she only turned 14 on the 23 of october and she went and write a Yaoi fic when she was supposed to be practising her latin cases ^_^.;# oh well

HOTARU

Wow, I've never seen those pairings before! You captured the emotions very well, and that was a very sweet story. (I've never really liked Suboshi but you may've changed that...) The sexual part was kinda a blur, but better safe than sorry ne? Good job, keep it up! JA ne!

I've always had knack for alternate pairings, but I'll have to admit that this {points to fic} was one I had never anticipated! I've actually seen one other story with this pairing, and let's just say there was a reason I didn't review. However, your wonderful style of writing made it click in my mind for one brief and shining moment and, naturally, I always appreciate the effort authors put into alternate couple fics. Not to mention the *wonderful* shounen-ai... Even though I don't particularly like this couple, you did do an excellent job with this fic and it's great that you can show what a character's thinking that explains why they do a certain thing. You're also very good with descriptions, especially when it comes to a character's actions and dialogue. Great job! Now, if I could just get someone to satify that Tasuki x Tamahome craving I have...{sighs} Maybe I should just start writing it myself? I do have so many *creative* ideas... Hehe... I'm looking forward to reading more of your stories!
-Kaen ^^
(Did you know that Tasuki x Tamahome is Yuu Watase's favorite shonen-ai pairing?)

That was a good fic! I love that pairing now! lol OK write another one plleeeaaseee fer me???