|Reviews for The Fine Line Between|
| Hinata Uzamaki 4/29/13 . chapter 1
Hi I loved it please write more it was very well written. So kawaii! .
| half-note 1/18/13 . chapter 1
my, my, my. What is this? A year late for me (as I had dropped form the fandom for a couple of years now) but you are kinda still around! I'm quite happy to see old fandom writers still write. Even if it's not as often. It bring back so many memories! Lady wildcatt you haven't lost your touch. I still enjoy it as much as I enjoyed reading the rest.
Still looking forward for Captain Neji and second part of this. Greetings!
| ma-chan-chan 12/21/12 . chapter 1
love this 3
| Snowshinobi 8/13/12 . chapter 1
Y'know, if this is probably going to be a two-parter, maybe you could consider writing the 2nd part from Neji's perspective . . . ? I really liked getting this look into Tenten's mind, and how we now sorta get that she IS kind of waiting for him . . . it'd be cool to see what he's been up to all this time . . . ? Please update as soon as you can though, I want to read more! :D
| Vampyric Ninja 4/8/12 . chapter 1
Ah, huzzah to well-written light and fluffy and humorous NejiTen! :D The conversation with Hinata was sweet too - indeed, Neji does need to work on his positive emotions. And on displaying jealousy when someone tries to make a move on a his girl.
I have to hope that, even when she does marry Neji and has a bunch of little Hyuuga-weapon masters, she'll still train that army of kitty ninjas. xD
Now be a man and make your move, Neji!
| Ekun-Asha 1/14/12 . chapter 1
Oh. My. God...
Don't leave me hanging!
(Looks at the starapples in her fruit bowl)
-Uh... You want one?-
| un4getabl3mem0ries 1/6/12 . chapter 1
Haha omg ninja kitty army... how Tenten-like to wander from living with cats to what kunai would best for suited for a cat LOL
| xxfatal 1/6/12 . chapter 1
I enjoyed this immensely, and cannot wait for the second installment, if there is to be one.
I would hazard to say that some of that "humor" she's being targeted with is simply his way of flirting with her. And when that thought came across my mind, I flailed. Veritably.
Tenten's inner dialogue really cracked me up in some places. For example, "frigid, unresponsive asshole." So much love for this fic. I just adore it.
Also, excited to hear you might be continuing "Captain Neji and the Hidden Straits of Death." I loved, loved, loved that fic, too.
I'll stop hyperventilating all over your review now. :)
| Luna 1/3/12 . chapter 1
This is too cute. I love Tenten in this story.
| Sayomi 1/3/12 . chapter 1
I hope you will write about Neji little hearbroken and sad when Hinata will tell him that Tenten dont love continue it.
| piixiiestiix 1/3/12 . chapter 1
I laughed out loud at Neji Hyuuga: Hamster tamer.
and Tenten's Kitty ninja army.
| wine.and.sun 1/3/12 . chapter 1
You have no idea how embarrassingly excited I was upon reading the name wildcatt in my inbox. Hyperventilated just a tad.
X) Please keep writing!
| Seynee 1/2/12 . chapter 1
Reading this filled me with all kinds of warm and fuzzy feelings - I think I was grinning all throughout!
I really, really enjoyed the way you brought out Neji's sense of humor and Tenten's and Lee's reactions to it; it was very natural and flowed very smoothly. I love Hinata's part in this, too, and a little part of me do wish that Naruto would punch Neji again - unless Tenten would like to take matters into her own hands and do it herself, of course. :)
Lastly… I just have to say: I LOVE YOU TENTEN YOU ADORABLY DORKY PERSON. Denial's not just a river in Egypt, indeed.
| Toboe LoneWolf 1/2/12 . chapter 1
Best way to start the a new year, ever.
Now everyone in Team Gai has an animal motif! Lee and squirrels, Neji and birds, and now Tenten with HAMSTERS! (Bonus hilarious points: Hamster is named Hamtaro after the show. Hamtaro we can do it all together)
(Although Tenten being allergic to wood shavings is odd, due to wood being a staple in weaponry. On a geek note, hamsters can get allergic to wood shavings too (it varies from hamster to hamster.))
Part 2: Neji Is Just As Adorkable As Tenten
| Sairalinde Inwe 1/2/12 . chapter 1
This is FANTASTIC! My mom actually had to come and check on me to make sure I wasn't dying I was laughing so hard. Everyone was PERFECTLY in character and I can actually imagine something like this happening with Team Gai. The way you write is really appealing to me too. I can kinda relate to the way you wrote Tenten, making me love the fic even more. Seriously, it's a really REALLY AMAZING story and I can't wait for the second part!
And I'm really excited you're continuing "Captain Neji and the Hidden Straits of Death"! I love that fic too _